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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby zuko614 » Wed Jun 03, 2009 6:16 pm

stupid copy/paste xD
thanks met its fixed now

and thank u met and poi im glad u enjoyed it
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby Nev » Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:14 pm

you called me met (no offense, lol)...BTW it is awesome, I love the story.
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby Kiara » Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:30 pm

awesomeeeeeeee =D

that really must have been a slog to write! amazing though, thankyou =]
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby zuko614 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:28 am

thank you :)
it was quite fun writing really
like i said its probably my third favorite chapter
the more i like it the easier/funner it is

and i thought you were met o.O
who are u? XD
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby Renori Fa » Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:09 am

He is EV. Formerly known as "witch-doctor scapel"
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby Kiara » Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:27 pm

nope, met is still going by Metallica1554 zu =P
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby Nev » Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:46 pm

Lol, thanx for remembering Poi, lol, Just forget the name....call me ev (Lowercase lol) or evan....sorry zuko, slight diversion there,,,,can't wait for the next chapter
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby zuko614 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 6:01 pm

ahhh EV
its just the sig looks like something met would do XD
and next chapter no clue when it will be up
i shall update when i have one
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby Nev » Fri Jun 05, 2009 6:11 pm

lol, it was all paint...lol, I have another fanfic/literary work(if you can call it that ) yippeeeeee, I shall soon replace the sig with a much gentler sig...
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Re: The Omega Squad 14th Chapter Up

Postby zuko614 » Fri Jan 08, 2010 4:03 am

“This is the best medical treatment he can get.” Benson said as he looked at John, who was hooked up to multiple machines. “Until he slips out of this coma.”
“Thanks for letting us stay here.” Brian said.
“Daniel is our common enemy. He destroyed your home, so this is the least I can do. Manson, I would like to ask you a few questions.”
“Of course. I will tell you what I can. However, certain things..” Everett was interrupted by Matt
“Have to happen before you tell us everything. We’ve got it. I’m heading out. If anyone wants to waste their time having their future planned out by Everett, be my guest. But I have better things to do.” After Matt left the room Susan turned to the others and said “I’ll go talk to him.”

* * * * *


Susan held in the intercom button outside Matt’s door. “Can I come in?”
“Sure.” She head over the intercom. The door slid open and then Matt walked and sat on the edge of his bed. Susan walked over and sat next to him.
“What’s wrong Matt?”
“Why do you think something’s wrong?”
“Ever since we got back you’ve been acting differently.”
“Maybe the trip to the future freaked me out a little.”
“If you’re going to lie at least make it a good one. You were the only one that seemed happy and excited about it.”
“You wanna know that badly?”
“Yes, Matt, please tell me.”
“Okay. I like Elena. And I keep trying to find the chance to tell her but something keeps coming up. First Ben died, then Daniel, then Daniel came back and attacked, now this trip to the future and John is out for the count..There is no right time.”
“Is that all? Not having a perfect time to ask Elena out?”
“It was. Before we went to the future.”
“What else is there?”
“You saw what I did to that guy. That I murdered him.”
“I’m sure you had a reason for it.”

* * * * *


“He..I mean..I did. That guy killed Elena. Sometime between now and then, he kills her. I don’t know what to do. I want to be with her but if I am then she’s going to die and I will turn into him. I was torturing that guy. All I wanted was revenge. That future self scared me. I don’t want to turn into him because I lose Elena.”
“I know how you feel. I have no idea what makes me side with Daniel, but at least I turned out good in the end.”
“You don’t know? Don’t be stupid Susan. You loved him. You still do.”
“Why would I love him after all he has done to us?”
“He fooled you. He fooled all of us. Don’t beat yourself up for caring about him a little more than the rest of us.”
They then heard Benson’s voice over the intercom. “All available units head to the main entrance now! We are being attacked by Daniel Hendricks. I repeat, Daniel Hendricks is attacking the main entrance. Omegas, head to the OP center.”

* * * * *


“Come on, Benson, quit making me wait.” Daniel killed another soldier that was attacking him. “Quit hiding from me.”
“You’re going to have to deal with us first.” Everett said.
Matt fired a bolt of electricity at Daniel, but he flew up and it missed him.
“Omegas, long time no see. You have a new member and new gear too.” Daniel looked at Everett and the small armor the Omegas were wearing. “Where have you been?” Daniel didn’t wait for an answer and began to read Katherine’s mind but couldn’t.
“What? Why can’t I read your minds?”
“You can thank Benson for that.” Matt said.
“No matter. Where you disappeared to is of little concern to me. All I want is you dead.”

Daniel shot energy blasts at the Omegas but they were able to dodge. The Omegas tried to combine their attacks with the small B.A.S.E. units left. Matt hit Daniel with electricity and then he was hit by a missile immediately after. There was a cloud of smoke that Daniel soon flew out of.”
“You can stop wasting our time with futile attacks. There is nothing you can do to me. Just give up.”
Daniel flew at Matt and grabbed him. He kept flying straight ahead and slammed Matt against a wall. Matt fell to his hands and knees as Susan shot wave of psychic energy at Daniel. It knocked him back at first but he quickly regained his balance and fired psychic energy back. Him and Susan were locked in psychic combat, and it was obvious Daniel was winning.
“Everett, give me a lift.” Elizabeth yelled. Everett flew to her and picked her up. He flew her up high and in Daniel’s direction. He threw her at Daniel and she morphed her hands into large spikes and stabbed Daniel in the back. Just before she did Susan was sent flying back from Daniel’s psychic attacks. Elizabeth took the spikes out of his back as he turned around to face her and she stabbed him again in the chest. Daniel made no reaction to the attack and grabbed her by the throat. She felt her arms being forced out of Daniel’s body and was lifted off the ground. She tried to free herself from Daniel’s grip but was unable to. She gasped for air while trying to think straight.
Elena was the only Omega near the two of them. She charged at Daniel and put all of her force into his arm, causing him to lose his grip on Elizabeth. Daniel waved his arm firing a psychic blast that sent Elena twenty feet back.
“Foolish girl.”
He walked over to Elena, leaving Elizabeth gasping for air. “We already know your mind tricks don’t work on me.” Daniel raised his hand which had a red glow flashing around it. “You have nothing to protect yourself with.”
“Don’t you touch her!” Matt yelled.
Daniel turned around and saw Matt. “Am I going to have to take all of you down before I can enjoy killing any of you?”
“You’re going to have to kill me before you do anything to her.”
“Fine. Have your heroic moment.”
“I won’t have to.” Matt smirked.
“Oh? And why not?”
“We just got another player.

A blade went through Daniel’s neck, then was pulled out. Daniel fell to the ground as Benson’s blade retracted into the armor on his arm.
“Get her out of here. Regroup with the Omegas.” Benson ordered.
“What about Daniel?” Matt helped Elena to her feet.
“I can hold him off until you all devise a plan. Now go.”
Daniel started to stand up as Matt and Elena ran to the other Omegas.
“Finally, Benson. It took you long enough.”
“I had to get ready for you. Make it as fair a fight as possible.”
“Are you prepared to die?”
“Not at your hands.”
“Shame. No one is going to kill you except me.” Daniel fired an energy blast at Benson, who raised his arm and seemed to absorb the attack.
“This armor is designed just for you, Daniel. It absorbs that attack, it’s heat and cold resistant, protects my mind, and so much more.”
“Why don’t we give it a test run then?” Flames engulfed all of Daniel’s arms, and he pointed them at Benson. Fire shot out at him as a shield lowered over Benson’s face and the flames covered his body. He walked out of the flames unharmed.
“Is that all you’ve got? “Benson mocked.
“Nowhere close.” Daniel shot an energy beam at Benson, who again raised his arm and his armor absorbed the attack like before. Blades came out of Benson’s wrists and he charged at Daniel. Benson began attacking Daniel with the blades but Daniel dodged it all with ease. Daniel grabbed both of Benson’s arms and headbutted him. Then Daniel unleashed a barrage of attacks on Benson, who tried to dodge them but they were too fast. However, the armor protected Benson from any major harm.
“I like the armor, Benson. It’s going to help me kill you very slowly.”
“You know what I like about this armor?” Benson asked. “It gives me and the Omegas the edge in number and power.”
The Omegas quickly surrounded Daniel.
“Leave and we won’t attack” Susan said.
Daniel laughed at her comment. “When will you people stop underestimating me?”
Psychic waves shot in every direction from Daniel. All of the Omegas and Benson were knocked back from it except for Susan. Daniel then fired an energy blast at her which she had no way to dodge at such close range. It hit her and she fell to the ground, severely injured from the attack. Daniel picked her up and held her up.
“Go ahead. I don’t care about living now.”
“Why is that, Susan?”
“Because of what you did to me. You betrayed me.”
“I made you care for me. Much less likely to be a traitor when you’re part of a couple.” He smirked.
“I loved you.” She said under her breath.
“Please. We were only together a few months. Just because you fooled yourself..”
“Don’t tell me how I felt.” She screamed at Daniel. “I loved you. And you betrayed me.”
Daniel stared at Susan and after a minute he let go of her. She stumbled back trying to stay on her feet.
“I’m going to let all of you live today. This is a one time deal. Don’t expect this again.”
“Why?”
Daniel paused and looked at her. “You weren’t supposed to love me. I’m sorry.” Daniel turned and flew away.

* * * * *


“Come in.” Elena said.
“Matt walked into her room. “I was just coming to see how you were doing.”
“A few cuts and bruises but nothing compared to how I could have been. You know, dead.” Matt laughed as she continued. “Speaking of which, I never thanked you for saving my life.”
“No need to thank me.”
“Of course there is.” She stood up and wrapped her arms around his neck. “But how should I?”
Matt smiled “I could think of a few reasons.” Then he leaned forward and kissed her.

* * * * *


“Absolutely not! There is no way I’m going to..” Benson was interrupted by Everett.
“If Susan doesn’t hear exactly why Daniel let her live then she will turn against us. That’s a promise.”
“Do you have any idea the security I have with her?”
“Daniel isn’t going to kill her. Trust me.”
“What makes you so sure?”
“I know which things might change and which definitely won’t. Daniel won’t kill her anytime soon, and the only way to save Susan is if she hears exactly why Daniel is the way he is.”
“Fair enough. I will start working on the papers to clear her to you.”
“Thank you.”











exciting chapter if i do say so myself
hope i described the action well :) it looks awesome in my head lol
this was going to be the halfway chapter but im shortening it by 5 if i can. so there might only be 10 left :O
and next chapter u find out why daniel is the way he is :D
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