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Night in a small town

Postby eclips42 » Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:31 am

I was bored so i wrote this


"David!! You've gone too far. You killed 30 people, and for what, because steph told you that you wern't worth her time? All of the cops are dead but officer Collins and Deputy Right because of you. You need to stop."
"Can't you see Jess, i've cleaned up this town, the cops were all taking bribes. But now your in my way, I need to wipe that whore from the face of the earth and the only way to do it is through you so why don't you and your brother get out of my way befor I add you two to the body count."
I was tierd of him thretening my sister. He had been doing it since they broke up a few years back. I never thought he would do it but after today, I'm not so sure anymore. "You beter just go and turn yourself in, you have set this town in chaos, looting, gangs, no one is afraid to do anything with the cops gone."
"shut up, this is between me and your sister!! But this has gone on long enough. Move, or die!!"
"I guess I choose you die."
"Not an option but I guess you can try."
He ran at me, his saraded machete in his hand. I pushed my sister away."Stand back." I had no wepon but since the crash I have always been armed. Half my body was replaced with robotics, but they were able to not change the look from the outside by saving the skin. His blade hit my hand and riped apart the skin but didn't cut the titaniom alloy. The pain was masked by my anger. I griped the blade crushing it and shattering the blade. I expected his eyes to fill with fear when he realized I had inplants and prostetics, but they didn't change. I felt a slash on my chest, my eyes closed and I yelled in pain.
As I fell from the blow to my face, his target changed. He stabed my sister with what was left of his machete. He pushed it in and pulled it out over and over, I could only watch in horror as she fell to the ground. He didn't stop he kept desecrating her body with the dirty blade. The anger built to an overwelming point, I snaped. I no longer cared for my safty all I wanted was him to suffer.
I stood up and stumbled tward him the loss of blood was making me dissy but I never lost focus. He heard me walk up behind him. He jamed the blade into my side, I griped his sholder, I continued to sqweez until I felt his sholder shatter in my grip. His face showed no pain. With my other hand I griped his hip and peeled his lower body away from the top. his face never changed, he just continued to smile as the lights of his eyes fade. I couldn't stop I distroyed his body, I crushed his head and riped it apart with my hands. The bones and flesh that was his body lay on the ground in front of me, I felt no regret. I turned to my sister afraid of what I might see, all of her wounds were bleeding, her insides trying to come out. I picked her up and walked down mainstreet to the hospital where she later died, with her went the last part of me. I was now an empty shell of a man living my life reliving that night over and over everytime I dream.
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