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Zuko's Poem To Katara

Postby foreverkataang » Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:11 pm

When you?re around,
The sun shines brighter,
And my power grows.

When I?m around,
The moon shines brighter,
And your power grows.

When we?re together,
Our loves shows.

And forever, it shall always be seen.
A feeling we get-oh what does it mean?

I need you with me,
A day I cannot go without,
I need to see your face,
When we enter a new place.

Support is something the other gives,
To each other-it always lives.

With you by my side,
I?ll end this war I never wanted,
I am sorry, but I can?t help that I lied.
I had told you I didn?t want the war,
Even though it was false.
But now, I know the truth.

We are both in our youth,
And have the power to makes things right.
And every day, and every night,
I?ll try with all of my might,
To make things the way they were,
To end all harm and war,
Because, I am different.

I have changed.
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Postby scarletcougar » Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:52 am

oh... cool! Not what I would expect from a Kataang fan!! I love the ending!! It tied nicely into the season finale.
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Postby mauigal15 » Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:57 am

cute!
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Postby rosegilmore » Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:58 am

agreed!

I give you props but could you maybe please with sugar on top use that with you 'the secret they live?'

You are such a great writer and i think you can make zuko remember..

once again
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Postby darthvader » Thu Apr 12, 2007 10:42 am

i would give u karma for such an AWESOME poem but i cant due to ure a kataangist.
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Postby secret » Sun Oct 07, 2007 5:33 pm

Wow, I don't normally like poetry but wow
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Postby vampireavatar » Sat Nov 03, 2007 9:52 pm

i think that kataang will come to fruition but i could be wrong, plus your poem is truly a beautiful form of literature.
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Postby vampireavatar » Sat Nov 03, 2007 9:55 pm

Also i would give karma but for some reason i cant
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