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Tohomas Journey Prologue

Postby MadParanoia » Tue Jun 19, 2012 1:28 am

WARNING contains graphic violence, language, and sexual content. don't say I didn't warn ya!

This chapter takes place before episode 1 of Avatar legend of korra



I sat quietly next to my parents in our living room. "Dad why are we waiting for"? I said impatiently. "Hush boy, just do what the men say when they get here and you will bring great honor to our family." said my dad in a hushed tone. He frantically searched his pockets and pulled out his pipe. "Well what if I don't want to listen to these men?" I asked. My dad stopped loading his pipe and quickly delivered a smack to my face. "Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh! I HATE YOU!" I said between sobs. "Atsadi! Please hes only a couple of years old!" Yelled my mother. My father looked at her directly in her face "you would dare let this sorry excuse for a child ruin the honor and fame that would be brought to our family just because he gets his feelings hurt?" *Knock* Knock* Knock* It immediately got quiet. "wipe away the tears boy and remain quiet unless spoken to." Explained my father to me. He walked to the door and dusted off his suit jacket before answering the door. As he opened the door three men dressed in white and blue robes greeted the family. "Welcome to my families house, we are honored to have the members of the white lotus in our residence." Stated my dad while bowing. "Like wise, It is a honor to be in the presence of the greatest warrior in all of the Northern water tribe and a well known noble too!" Said the member of the white lotus bowing to both of my parents. This man was very strange looking. He was very short but also old and had hair pointing out from the sides of his head. The man walked up to me and examined me. "I expect this child to be the one you spoke of in your letter?" Asked the man. "Yes this is Tahoma a water bending prodigy!" Stated my father proudly. The man turned and faced my father "Yes but that doesn't mean that he is the Avatar." He turned back to the other two men "is the test prepared?" The men looked at each other then turned back to him and nodded. "Great then bring it out" demanded the short man. Within a couple of minutes the members of the white lotus had a mat rolled out on the floor and thousand of toys resting on it. The short man walked up to me. " Tahoma, Pick four toys from this mat." I looked over all of the toys there was so many. There was a hand drum, a toy snake, a duck you can pull around, even a pull-string propeller. I looked carefully and examined each one but then spotted a small wooden turtle. I grabbed it but was disappointed when it didnt do anything. I then reached for the pull-string propeller just to see how it worked. I then grabbed a small replica of a crow or vulture or some kinda bird so it could provide company to my turtle. I then noticed a rather large boat and picked it up and sat my turtle and bird on top of the boat. The white lotus members looked at the toys I picked and took them away from me and began to roll up the mat. "Excuse me Atsadi but can I have a word alone with you? oh and be sure to bring your son". requested the man. My father picked me up and walked into the dining area that we all eat at every night. " Atsadi.... we have some bad news and some very bad news, you might want to sit down for this." said the short man in a very quiet voice. My father slowly sat me down on the floor and took a seat at the table. "what is it? Is he not the next Avatar? Because his waterbending skills are great and espicialy at such a youn-" The short man cut my father off by raising his hand. " I am sorry to say but your son is not the Avatar." said the short man slowley. A very sad and disappointed expression came over my fathers face. "But.... sometimes the test..." continued the man. "can tell us the future of people who will come in contact with the Avatar." My dads face kept a very sad look. "Due to the toys he picked and the order he took them, we can conclude that he will be killed by the hands of the Avatar." Said the man emotionless. My father then let a single tear fall across his cheek. "H.... Will he be attacking the Avatar or..." Asked my dad. "We cannot tell if he will be killed due to self-deffense reasons or if it is because of an accedent but we can onley expect the worst." Explained the man. I didnt really understand what the man was talking about but it was making my father more and more upset and he would keep looking at me with.. hate or rage in his eyes like he did when I landed an attack wrong during training or messed up a waterbending form. After the men left no one looked at me like they used to. They acted like they where afraid of something and my father stopped training me in fighting stating that it was too dangrous to do so.


BTW all other chapters are going to be longer then this. this is just a prologue to the whole story.
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Re: Tohomas Journey Prologue

Postby MadParanoia » Tue Jun 19, 2012 2:03 am

Sorry i misspelled the title to my own fan-fic lol. my bad
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